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     Whats up! Hey my name is Jordan! You are on my page! I like sports, drawing, and emailing/talking to my friends. I am from Newfane VT and dont really enjoy to read but I do anyway. I think the reason why I dont like to read is because when I was at S.M.S (Saint Michael School) the books they made us read were boring. The books that I like are the type of books that are scary and humorous. I love this page (everybody does, am I right?) because I get to talk about any book that I read. Some of the books that I will be commenting on might not be DCF books but just every day books. Here  are a couple of books that I read.

 

The books that I read.....

 

     I just got done reading The Indian in the Cupoard by Lynne Reid Banks. I felt like Indian in the Cupboard was a very exciting book. It took place in London but if you see the movie it is in New York. It was about a kid named Omri and he just got a cupboard and an indian for his birthday. The one thing Omri loved about cupboards is puting things in it. Omri went of and found a key to unlock the cupboard to put his indian into. When the birthday party was over he put the indian into the cupboard, and locked it. When he unlockes it an alive indian came out of the cupboardThis book is very uniquie and you can picture everything in your mind. Though reading this book the expresion dont judge a book bye it's cover is very explainitory because on the cover it does'nt look like the best book but it is a good one. I recomend this book to anybody who likes fun, humorous, and somwhat sad books.  

       Okay, I just got done reading The Magic Finger by Raul Daul. It isn't for kids on my level, but I forgot my homework one night and started reading this book. This book is about a girl that is so ticed at her neighbors for hunting. The father and both his boys brought back 16 ducks. The girl saw them and she was mad. Mr. Gregg (the father) finally told her to buzz off. That maded her even mader. She got so irritated that she started felling a tingling in her finger and pointed it at that "horrid man" and turned him and his family part ducks. He had the size of a duck and the wings of a duck. This is the book you should read if your looking for a short book.

         So I just got done with the book Leanin'Dog. Let me tell ya if you dont want a sad book dont read this one. This girl Dessa Dean is out in the woods with her mother. While they were walking in the woods, and a blizzard hit. Her mom died of hypothermia. Since her mom has just died

 

Comments (15)

jessie said

at 6:34 pm on Oct 2, 2009

nice page you don`t like to read!

jen said

at 11:11 am on Oct 3, 2009

nice work jordan keep going

caity said

at 5:03 pm on Oct 4, 2009

Why don't you like to read?

jordan said

at 8:03 pm on Oct 4, 2009

Reading just isnt my thing

jordan said

at 4:28 pm on Oct 5, 2009

suzzane, can you check this

caity said

at 7:35 pm on Oct 5, 2009

Hum.

caity said

at 9:18 pm on Oct 6, 2009

I was saying hum about the reading thing.

jordan said

at 6:57 am on Oct 7, 2009

oh well if you read my...paraghraph thingy you would know why I dont. I edited it agian

Suzanne Paugh said

at 11:45 am on Oct 7, 2009

Jordan, I can see you have done a lot of editing on your intro paragraph. Nice work. The review starts out great (introducing the main character, talking a little about the plot), but it seems unfinished. Having not read this book (in a long time!) I am unsure how the story is resolved and need to know more about he setting. See if you can add some of these points to your review and I will take a look at it in a few days.

jordan said

at 5:01 pm on Oct 7, 2009

thanks suzzane

mariah said

at 8:41 pm on Oct 15, 2009

llluuuuvvvv da pg u lik pickd da best piccc!!!!!!!!!!!!

evan said

at 1:27 pm on Oct 17, 2009

hey Jordan nice pg

Suzanne Paugh said

at 6:34 pm on Oct 17, 2009

Jordan, nice changes to your review. It makes more sense to me now! Go through you work carefully and see if you can make some edits...some of your spelling is not right and some punctuation is a little off. Do your best, and then ask a classmate to check it out and edit anything you might have missed. You should check out a DCF next! There are some great ones this year...

caitlyn said

at 5:40 pm on Oct 21, 2009

i cant believe u dont like reading!

mariah said

at 4:00 pm on Nov 14, 2010

jordam i love you!

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